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Ch 2
Someone new part 2
     As I looked around there were strange paintings of floating mountains, one was red the other was blue. I made my way past the blue one and saw letters scattered on the walls, 'COME COME COME…..' and kept saying it down the hall. I finally made my way down to this blue door with a table in front of it. I saw a vase on top of it with a red rose in it and decided to pick it up and take it with me. I then moved the table out of the way and opened the blue door. I walked in to see a picture of a woman in blue smiling and has her eyes shut. I looked at the words at the bottom of it but I could barley understand it. I turned and saw a blue key by my feet and picked it up. I then heard something behind me like something was melting. I turned to see the painting of the woman with her eyes open and what looked like blood spilling from them. I backed up a bit and ran out of the room. I looked over at the walls,
                              'THEIF, THEIF, THEIF, THEIF, THEIF, THEIF!'
The spread across like a wildfire and just said the same thing over and over again. I ran down the hall but skidded to a stop and fell over to see the word 'THEIF' scatter right in front of me. I got up as quickly as I could and ran down to the paintings. I looked around for the stairs but they were nowhere to be found, it was just a wall covering it up. I decided to go the other way and as I did I found the blue door and took out the key and unlocked it. I opened the door and stepped in. As I walked in I saw I was in a green hallway with many bug paintings on the walls. I went straight ahead and as I did these hands came popping out of the walls trying to grab me. I ran down passing them all and made it down to another door, this time it was a green one. There was a picture of an ant next to it…
It took me a few minutes to figure it out. I placed the ant picture on the hole in the floor. I stepped on it and the bug squashed under my feet. I walked to the other door and opened it. I saw a headless statue and a green key in front of it. I went over and grabbed the key. As I did the statue in front of me got closer as I backed away a bit. It growled at me and came faster as I ran through the door. It followed me until it crashed through the painting. I ran down the halls with the hands and went to the door. I used the key and unlocked it. As I walked in I saw a room shaped as a cat.
It forever but I finally made it through the cat path. I walked through to see many abnormal paintings. I saw one that had a toung swinging back and forth. I walked by it and spat at me. As it did it touched me and it burned like acid. There was a table with a vase and I put my rose in it and returned back to health. I then stepped around it and went down the hall. I figured out the code on the door and got an apple for the lips on the other side. I took it and went back down the hall. I turned where the lips are and fed it the apple. 'thanks for feeding me you may now pass through my mouth' it said as it opened up. I passed through and it led me to another room.  I saw many paintings of something they used to chop your head off with back then. I was careful and saw the large thing coming down and as it did I ran over to the stairs without it cutting me. I went down the steps and opened up one of the doors. I walked into a red room with a creepy atmosphere. I looked around at the different things and saw painting of a girl in red. I went up and looked at the name, 'lady in red'. I turned and walked back till I heard some growling. I saw it was the painting and thumped to the ground and the lady in it started crawling after me. I ran around  the place trying to find the key. I went to where she popped out and grabbed the key and hurried through the door. The room was full of book cases and the door was locked. I pulled a book on one of the bookshelves  and heard a click. I opened the door and walked in.  I saw another vase and put the rose in and returned back to health. I went down the hall to the right and saw a man lying on the ground. I saw him and my eyes widened. 'he was from the gallery as well' I said to myself. I knelt down next to him and tapped him a bit. He didn't budge but he looked pretty injured.  I looked around for his  rose but couldn't find it. I went down the hall to look some more since I couldn't just leave him there. I took the key he had as well, I went into another room and looked around. I saw some writing for a painting 'lady in blue', it said but there was no painting. I used the key on the door I found and opened it. I saw blue pettles on the ground, I looked and saw the lady in blue picking some of the pettles. She saw me and growled she started crawling after me. I ran through the door and shut it behind me. I  backed up  and heard some crashing and glass shattering. I looked and saw she crashed through the window and came after me once more. I ran around dogging her and went through the door where I found her. I saw his rose and picked it up, there were still some pettles on it which was a good sign. I took it with me and ran out to where I found the vase. I put it in and the rose returned to health. I smiled and went to where I found him. I knelt down beside him and shook him a bit "hey get up" I said. He groaned a bit and put one of his hands flat on the ground and started to come up a bit on his hands and knees. He looked up at me and looked out of breath. "are you alright I asked him" my eyes full of worry. He looked at me and smiled "I am now thanks to you." I sighed with relief and stood up. I held my hand out to him and he took it. "I'm sorry I didn't get your name, my name is Garry and yours" "Cora" I said with a smile.

                                                                 "Cora, huh?......"
well Garry appears :icongarryplz:
i love Garry so much hes to cute :heart: [love him more than Alphonse ;p

comment please!!

Ib- Kouri

Cora- me

enjoy

Background music when meeting Garry;
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v-on Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
CONTINUE THE STORRYYYYY ;; w ;;//

By the way.. How to submit like this?
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Luna182 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i will!
submit like what?
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v-on Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
See the others for more info. XD It's hard to explain.
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Luna182 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
I got more up just as you asked
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v-on Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
YAYAYAYAY XD
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Luna182 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
check'em out soon kay :)
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v-on Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
I will XD
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Luna182 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks XD
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Sakura-Araragi Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This story is cool. It kinda reminds me of Alice In Wonderland

And that "thing that was used to chop people's heads off back then" is called a guillotine. :)

It's good so far.
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Luna182 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks

ohhhhh thats what it called

thanks
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